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:iconfluttershyhappyplz: The jelly is not the only thing that warms our heart.


Thanks everyone! And Thanks for featuring on EQD. :aww:
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Critique by masencantaluna May 12, 2013, 10:37:32 AM
The illustration is very straight forward, easy to see, and understand (even without the text to aid it). The artist definitely captures the feel of original cartoon with all the important aspects of the characters. But more so than considering it as a fan art piece featuring cute pictures of animals doing something, one must also consider its literary merits. The story itself isn't entirely new, but rather a traditional tale in modern society, as we all put in a great deal of diligence for those we love, especially on days set aside to honor those individuals.

The only flaws with this innocently simple piece are minor line errors and unused text boxes that were never removed. All-in-all, a wonderful, simple piece, although I would have recommended it be done in a comic page style, rather than vertical strip.
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The devious plan of the child that cares for the one that takes care of them, always for mom. Found this comic quite enduring as I have grown into quite the devious little planner myself. Leaving out circumstances, I don't have to worry about money, yet that doesn't speak for everyone out there, and what speaks to everyone is finding that quintessential "perfect gift" for our moms.

Vision: The comic has great insight as we are taken on an innocent shopping trip that gives Angel the perfect idea for his "mother" whom takes care of him. All of it unfolds as General Angel Bunny, commander supreme takes hold and leads the charge of the other animals. The comic comes together quite nicely as it ends with a tearfully happy Fluttershy thankful for the companions she has, ones that care for her in return just as much as she cares for them.

Originality: I'm fond of the piece picking the usually problematic bunny of representing the entity that leads the charge. His personality is represented quite well during the scene where he is dressed in uniform, commanding the animals as to what their respective roles are to assist in the amassing of funds to purchase the object they want to present to one they love.

The Bit coin progress bar was also a great touch to help work as an indicator of progress to the animal's goal, and as a scene breaker.

Technique: There were a few instances where it seems the technique of the piece switched up, but these were kept to very minimum instances, and it doesn't detract from start to finish. DJ-P0N3's / Vinyl's mane was possibly the most noticeable because it looked like a quick vector, however, again, it doesn't detract from the fluid motion of the comic and it's unique style.

Impact: Overall, I am fond of the piece and like it's progression. Reminded me of my own little ordeal when I still had to find a present for my mother. When you find that one gift, just as Angel did, you know that in your heart, your mother will love it without a doubt.

Nicely done. ;)
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SilvershyMelody Featured By Owner May 22, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so adorable I think I'm going to lose my mind! I love you're artwork so much and this warms my heart to the core. You illustrate your pictures with such detail and meaning I love all your work that I come across. Please continue doing such a good job! 
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:iconkatban:
katban Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
:squee::squee::faint::tombstone:
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:iconmidnightrose3000:
midnightrose3000 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2016  Student Interface Designer
dawwww
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:icon1datmlp:
1DATMLP Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2016  Student General Artist
I'm kinda confused..
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:iconeeveefromkalos123:
EeveeFromKalos123 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Title should have said: "Warning-May give diabetes"
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:iconshadowvx:
ShadowVX Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2016
Angel looks adorable and awesome in military uniform. XD
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:iconalicornhybrid88:
AlicornHybrid88 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2016
This. I think I'm in love. Also, I REALLY wanted to pet the white cat when it gets its sandwich, that LOOK....poor kitty. (And the others too!) 
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ChuluSempai180 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2016  Student Writer
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!! I would love to see this in an actually episode and it would be a nice Mother's Day episode. The animals doing this surprise for Fluttershy while she had gotten the jar herself and the animals had these jobs in helping the other ponies in making Fluttershy happy. That brings a smile on my face. 
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MiragePotato Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2016
right on the feelings
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Pinkheadphones12 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG I saw Taiwan and China(from Hetalia) :'D

Oh and this it's so adorable!!! <33!!!!
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G-GIRL20000912 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2016  Student
IK!!!!
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:iconsnooping58173:
snooping58173 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2015
They could have just bought ketamine. That works too.
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Windspeed8 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2015
so wonderful
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:iconnah223445566:
NAH223445566 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2015
T.T
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:iconanimatorsnake:
Animatorsnake Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2015
... my celestia this is BEAUTIFUL *tears of rivers*
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silverkitsunepup45 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfeelsplz:
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:iconmidnightblaze16:
MidnightBlaze16 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2015  Student
Ooooh it's Mother's Day. I thought it was her birthday...
THAT MAKES IT EVEN MORE SWEET AND ADORABLE!!!!
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:iconlonelyloner03:
LonelyLoner03 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015
T^T  So sweet...  *sniff*
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:iconmariozekeda:
MarioZekeda Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2015
no...voy...a ....llorar!!!!
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:iconnanadive:
nanadive Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015
.....I SEEE PONY VERSION OF TAIWAN AND CHINA!!!!!! YAAAAAAA ....MY HEART!! THIS, IS SOOO CUTEEEE AND SWEEETTTT AND JUST ARGHGHGHGHGGHG I CANTTTTT ITS JUST TO CUTE!!!!!! XD THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS!
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:iconhoneybeegirl94:
HoneyBeeGirl94 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016
You're not the only one. I was just enjoying this adorable comic, until I saw those two and I started screaming in joy. XD
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:iconkikyoyami8:
kikyoyami8 Featured By Owner May 31, 2015
Awww sooo cute <3
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:iconseabluewolf:
Seabluewolf Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
This is so sweet
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:iconpixelart2003:
PixelArt2003 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist Interface Designer
this is so cute and heart touching at the same time(sorry if my english is bad im from another country)
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Mike-Rosoft Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015
By the way, have you read G.M.Berrow's 'Fluttershy and the Fine Furry Friends Fair'? If so, the book's ending might remind you of something in this comic... (Great minds think alike!)
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HoneyBeeGirl94 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015
:iconsqueeeeplz: Best thing that I've ever stumbled upon! 
Not only that we get to see redeemable qualities of Angel Bunny and how much FlutterShy means to the animals, but also how much of a mother she is, too.

You also took me off guard with :iconmanlychinaplz: and :iconcutetaiwanplz: as cameos in pony form. They are my favorite characters in Hetalia. 
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DiscordandDeath Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2015
...... i gotta stop looking at this guys stuff, i swear im going to have a heart attack soon from over cuteness.
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
D'aaaww... how cute...!!! It's so adorable that the animals consider Fluttershy as her "mother"... :heart: :love: :heart:
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sweetnsourtune25 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconfeelsplz:
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:iconbobo1806able:
Bobo1806able Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
The feels.
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:icongy8604black:
gy8604Black Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2014
I cried ;_;
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:icontinyandhuge:
TinyandHuge Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Student General Artist
So may feels!
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:iconchocolatninja:
ChocolatNinja Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Awwwwwwww, that's precious.
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Morlon01 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Hobbyist
I... don't really get, what happened from the point, where Angel woke up and saw Fluttershy with the heart warmer. I know, that there is probably some missunderstanding, but I didn't get the missunderstanding... explanation plz?
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:iconhowxu:
HowXu Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014
Sure. In that very scene, Angel found that Fluttershy bought another jar herself. 
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:iconmorlon01:
Morlon01 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Hobbyist
Ah, thanks. So that's where the second one came from.
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KaRyu1017 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Must... not... shed... tear!
Resistance is futile! Prepare to shed a tear!
Nooo! (sheds a tear) Well played, HowXu, well played.
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:iconskramer123:
skramer123 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
AWWWWWW
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:iconjennie5:
Jennie5 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014
i'm crying right nowCry emote so sad!!!:sad: 
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:iconzetaresp:
ZetaRESP Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No, I'm not crying. It's liquid pride, that's all. And no, that's not my heard in the ER, you're just imagining things. I mean, I have it here, it's not a metallic replacement getting slowly melted an-HOLY CUERNOS, MY REPLACEMENT HEART'S MELTING!! DOCTOR, HURRY UP!!
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Gardboyz-Productions Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Must...not...cry...
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:iconcjcroen:
CJCroen Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so sweet!

Also, as a side note, is that a Hetalia cameo I see? :D
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:iconkitty-demon18:
kitty-demon18 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
You have an incredibly beautiful style and I love how well you communicate the story without any words and this story is particularly sweet
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:iconallstar2648:
Allstar2648 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014
Never mind heart-warming, or even heart-melting, that's so undeniably adorable it EVAPORATES your heart.

It was the point when she started crying...
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:iconmasaki1812:
Masaki1812 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
My eyes...they're leaking...
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:iconfaketsuki:
FakeTsuki Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
; AAAAAAAAA;
DAMN
DAMN
DAMN

; AAAAAAA;
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:iconkhan3:
khan3 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014
Right in the fucking feels man
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:iconninllot:
ninllot Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
T_T
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:iconleeayna-abadeer:
LeeAyna-Abadeer Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Student
CHINA AND TAIWAN!!!!!
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:iconpskullv:
pskullv Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
It was already brilliant, and then "Happy Mother's Day"...
*Standing Ovation*
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